Yuliana Z-Wrapped In Plastic Revision

This is my revised version of my photo Wrapped in Plastic of my oldest sister. I decided to go in a different direction with the photo. I tend to make my pictures very dark and after I took up Mr. Rigsby’s suggestion of lightening up this picture, I found that I liked it better. To me it showed more vulnerability in her since its bright enough to see more of her body. I also increased the detail and contrast to bring more awareness of the plastic shower curtain, trying to resemble a film she hides behind. Increasing kept the darks of her hair dark, brightening the photo helped show more of her as well as showing more of the reflectiveness from the shower curtain, and increasing saturation brought more colors in the blues reflected and her skin tone and lips. I decided to take off the lines because to me they were distracting and I was trying to put more into my photography, but I felt that it took away from this picture. I also decided to remove the “glitch” effect because I wanted the picture to be more clear and easier to understand. I liked the original idea I had but I prefer this new version