I took this photo Around May 22 at 10-ish o'clock I like how the photo looks with both collectibles I use as you can see it is a Spider-Man logo and the Spider-Man action figure and I try to make it look like a good pose and put a little bit more lighting and other stuff that I could add but I feel like I could've added more but I like how I did the thing but maybe different stuff in the background
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I think the Focus in this image is not quite up to expectation for an AP student. The photo is also underexposed which could have been improved with minor effort. The rule of thirds is completely ignored here where you see that the attempt to center was given but in the end the ground Spiderman is standing on is completely skewed to the left. The framing here is not as good as I would have wished like how the smaller Spiderman lego is not really in frame and is hidden behind the larger one. The dark Vs. Light areas are not really payed attention too. I would have liked to see this random stranger use better lighting to exemplify the detail which is lost here. I see zero attempt at story, mood, or attempt to create something more than a rushed photo for a project with minor effort to simply meet a photo quota for an assignment. I do not like this photo and it is not a keeper.
-Not Daniel
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